Feedback on our animatic

We showed our animatic to the class today. People said to us that the initial idea of the list and a hit man was a good one, but we were recommended to not include the cheese wire that we were going to include. People said that it didn't leave much to your imagination and it was a bit too easy to just use a cheese wire. Therefore we decided that we should take it out and not have it in the actual filming.

Rough Cut

Teacher Feedback

The blog is looking good. You need to put in the feedback you received for your animatic.
Also do some research into titles and consider what kind of titles you want to use in your thriller. The same thing should be done for your sound.
Keep up the good work.

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